Friday, April 5, 2013

The Life I Lost...



Can you see the smile and the twinkling eyes?
It is a farce if you see beyond that mask... 
Fighting her fear living others lies
Hiding the scar when anyone asks...

Wounded heart never to be healed
Teaching it never again to feel...
Endless time her soul revives again to be killed
Broken dreams in her destiny seals...


Tainted her image put in shame
Disdained she was writhing in pain... 
Robbed her respect willed whoever came
Corpse was trying to walk yet again... 

Seeking someone to see through her soul
Abused she was left all alone.. 
Shattered her never again to be whole
Unheard pleas lifeless forever moans...

12 comments:

  1. It is said that 'experience is the name given to our past mistakes'.

    I loved this one!

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  2. So much of pain in each word. I like ur smiling face always. Also you know well that I'd go to any extend to see u smile :)

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  3. i know dear :) but the point is "how is the poem?" :)

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  4. Hi. Wats ur mail id to contact u.
    Hi. I want to talk with you regarding something.
    Its something related with websites..

    And is this your emotionally moulded poem direct from your heart inspired from God Forbid Nirbhaya tragedy ??

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  5. "...Tainted her image put in shame
    Disdained she was writhing in pain...
    Robbed her respect willed whoever came
    Corpse was trying to walk yet again..."

    Reminded me of the tragic Delhi incident...wonderfully composed. I'm no pro with poems but I felt the poem came to a sudden end...

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  6. thanks :) there are something that have no ending.. the moaning continues.. end would come when there is hope :)

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